题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,作为交流学生去了美国新奥尔良市(New Orleans)学习生活了一年。在此期间,你住在Brown夫妇家中,他们为你提供吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请你给他们写一封感谢信,主要内容如下:
1.表示感谢;2.表达感受;3.欢迎来访;4.保持联系。
注意:1.词数100字左右; 2.信的开头与结尾已为你写好;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
Faithfully yours,
【答案】
Dear Mr and Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing to you from my home in China. I returned home safe and sound. When thinking of the wonderful days I spent in New Orleans, I just can’t help thinking of you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy experience. I’ve learned so much, not only English but also the culture. And I really enjoyed a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember this trip as well as your kindness.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you. I’ll be very glad to show you around. And you’ll surely have a pleasant visit here.
I’ll keep in touch and write to you later. Please take care!
Faithfully yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息说明具体情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该主要用一般过去时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如状语从句When thinking of the wonderful days I spent in New Orleans, I just can’t help thinking of you,还有固定句式It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay等