Question

书面表达（满分15）

作为中学生，你肯定经历多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容，简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。注意：词数100-120（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

消极态度	积极态度	你的结论
1．情绪低落 2．丧失信心	1．与老师交流，分析总结原因 2．制定下一次的目标	……

 

We middle school students have had many tests or exams to test our knowledge or abilities. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Of course these successes and failures will bring us joys and sorrows.                  

                                                                              

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We middle school students have had many tests or exams to test our knowledge or abilities. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Of course these successes and failures will bring us joys and sorrows.

In face of failures students take different attitudes. Some fall in low spirits when they don’t do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They turn to teachers for help, finding out and analyzing the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes. Besides, they set the goals for the next exam and make an effort to catch up with others.

I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know , failure is the mother of success. Even great men have failed many times before they succeeded. So we must deal with our failure correctly .

【解析】

试题分析：本篇写作题材是中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段是消极态度；第三段积极态度；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。

考点：考查议论文写作

点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。