Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你是李华，一名高三学生，在网络上看到一所国外大学的招生信息 (admission information), 该大学对中国学生开设30多个专业（major），你对此非常感兴趣,打算用英语撰写一份个人申请，主要内容包括：

1. 想申请的专业； 2. 个人优势； 3. 进入大学后的设想。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 书信格式已给出； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently noticed the admission information of your university on the Internet. I’m writing to apply for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students.

For one thing, I do well in English and it will be easy for me to complete the courses in your university. For another, I have been the monitor during my school years, which has promoted my organizing ability. Having organized a few school activities successfully, I’m determined to be a manager as my dream job. Therefore, my plan is to join the Students’Union and participate in some meaningful social activities to learn some advanced management experience.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构，增加了自己的细节。运用了丰富的词汇短语，如apply for申请，do well in擅长，be easy for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事很简单，look forward to期待，participate参加，这个词是一个很增加亮点的小词，注意不要只会使用attend，join等低端词汇。同时，for one thing, for anather, therefore等连接词的使用也使文章更加顺畅。