Question

【题目】你堂兄建华在国外学习, 你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业, 不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：

1．建议他回国；

2．你的理由是：1）学有所用, 就业容易；2）照顾父母。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．行文应连贯, 内容应完整；

3．开头语与落款已为你写好。

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

Best wishes

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for ?

Best wishes.

【解析】

试题分析；本文是一篇书信体写作。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、书信体作文要注意格式严谨，注意观点明确，条理清晰，称呼和结尾的格式。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。使用了大量短语使文章结构清晰，如In my opinion, For one reason, For another reason, Therefore, ；使用了多种句式和结构what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China.是主语从句，能使句子简洁明了；So what are you waiting for ?是反问句，使文章语气生动活泼。