Question

用英语写一篇120左右的读后感，阐述你对下面这段英语文字的理解,开头已给，不计入总词数。

Work while you work, and play while you play.

For that is the way to be happy and gay.

All that you do, do with your might（力量）

Things done by halves are never done right. 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Work and play are both necessary for us. We should work to gain knowledge and make money. On the other hand, we should play to have fun and have a good rest.

Being hard-working is one of the qualities to make one’s dream come true. We can not achieve success without it. Once we set our goal, we must work hard until we succeed. It is no good leaving things half done. However, we can not work all the time without proper rest. Otherwise we cannot keep physical and mental health. When you work, remember to put all your heart into it. Then when you play, you will be even more involved and relaxed.  

Only when we understand the relationship between work and play can we arrange our time properly and achieve our goal without harming our health.

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