Question

第II卷

第三部分 写作:（共二节，满分40分）

Ⅳ. 第一节 短文改错：（共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

      增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

      删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。     

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

On Monday morning, I was on my way to school when suddenly as I saw a boy knocked down by the car. In a hurry, I ran over and found the boy was serious hurt with much blood on his face. Immediately, I call an ambulance and the boy was taken to the nearest hospital. For my relief, the boy was fine and would recover in a few day. I went away without giving his name. I was late for class, and I felt happy for what I had done. As a proverb says, “ Help others is the source of happiness.” I feel our duty to make the world a better place to live in.         

Answer 1

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knocked down by the car. In a hurry, I ran over and found the boy was serious hurt with much blood

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on his face. Immediately, I call an ambulance and the boy was taken to the nearest hospital. For my

                     called                                                 To

relief, the boy was fine and would recover in a few day. I went away without giving his name. I

                                            days                        my

was late for class, and I felt happy for what I had done. As a proverb says, “ Help others is the

but                                              Helping

source of happiness.” I feel∧our duty to make the world a better place to live in.                                                    

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