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【题目】短文改错

Many moved stories remain deep in people’s heart to this day. In 2008 a terrible earthquake strike Wenchuan, there many people lost their lives and homes. After the earthquake under a fallen building, a mother as well as her baby were found by some soldiers. When the soldiers were ready to take them away, they surprised to find the baby in the mother’s arms still alive. The baby was sleeping but wasn’t hurt at all. Between the dead mother and the living baby, there was a cell phone with a short message on the screen. It read, “Don’t worry, my baby. Mom is for you. If you can survive, don’t forget that I love you.”

The story moved many people deep, including me. I couldn’t hold back my tears when I read these word. One is great if he loves others when he is in the danger.

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本文是一篇记叙文。许多感人的故事至今仍深深地留在人们的心中。文章讲述了汶川地震时感人的故事。文章告诉我们“一个人如果在危险的时候爱别人，那他就是伟大的。”

1.考查情感动词-ed和-ing的用法。句意：许多感人的故事至今仍深植于人们的心中。情感形容词，-ed形式通常修饰“人”；-ing形式通常修饰“物”，故把moved改成moving。

2.考查一般过去时态。句意：2008年汶川大地震，许多人失去了生命和家园。根据2008可知句子用一般过去时态，故把strike改成struck。

3.考查定语从句。句意：2008年汶川大地震，许多人失去了生命和家园。此处Wenchuan做先行词，在后面的定语从句中作地点状语，故把there改成where。

4.考查主谓一致。句意：一位母亲和她的孩子被一些士兵发现了。此处as well as连接两个主语，后面的谓语动词遵循就远原则，故把were改成was。

5.考查被动语态。句意：当士兵们准备把他们带走时，他们惊奇地发现婴儿还活着，躺在母亲的怀里。be surprised to do sth.“感到吃惊地做某事”，此处是过去的事情，且句子主语they是复数形式，故在they后加were。

6.考查并列连词。句意：婴儿正在睡觉，一点也没有受伤。此处是并列的递进关系，故把but改成and。

7.考查介词。句意：妈妈和你在一起。be with“和------在一起”，故把for改成with。

8.考查副词。句意：这个故事深深地感动了很多人，包括我。此处表示抽象概念“深深地”，故把deep改成deeply。

9.考查名词复数。根据these可知后面的名词用复数形式，故把word改成words。

10.考查固定搭配。句意：一个人如果在危险的时候爱别人，那他就是伟大的。固定搭配：in danger“在危险中”，故把the去掉。