Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack,

I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer.

In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket. I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met . Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.

Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

1.第一句：pleasing改成pleased

2.第一句：greatly改成great

3.第二句：your改成my

4.第三句：In改成At

5.第三句：as和shopping之间加a

6.第四句：去掉have

7.第五句：and改成but

8.第五句：works 改成work

9.第六句：after 改成before

10.第七句：solve改成solving

【解析】

试题分析：

1.pleasing改成pleased. 固定结构Be pleased to do sth.开心地做某事。故将pleasing改成pleased.

2.greatly改成great. 分析语境a great time：一段精彩的时光。Greatly为副词，此处应该用形容词词性，故将greatly改成great.

3.your改成my. 分析语境Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer. 我将和你分享我的暑期工作经历。根据句意可知应为“我的工作经历”，故将your改成my.

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5.as和shopping之间加a. 分析语境I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket我被一家超市雇为一名导购。A shopping guide：一名导购。名词前应有冠词修饰，此处不是特指，所以用a表示泛指。故在as和shopping之间加a.

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7.and改成but. 根据原文 Sometimes I was laughed at和I was praised for my wonderful works by many people有时候我会被嘲笑，大多数情况下，许多人因我出色的工作表现而夸奖我。可知，前后文之间为转折关系，故将and改成but.

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