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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿)。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help othersAt school I get along well with my classmatesTherefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the timeIt’s the relationship among my desk mate and meHe is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule wellBut he’s a person with few wordsWhat’s more, he got angry easilyI don’t know what to deal with himMaybe that ’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughtsI value our friendshipI hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other betterI do hope we will be close to each other than before.

【答案】

【1】加上to

【2】Therefore--However

【3】myself--me

【4】among--between

【5】rule--rules

【6】got--gets

【7】what--how

【8】why--because

【9】去掉with

【10】close--closer

【解析】

试题分析:

【1】文中第二句。考查固定短语:be ready to do sth.,意为:乐于做某事。本句中缺少to,故加上to.句意为:我每门功课都不错,而且乐于助人。

【2】文中第三句。前一句意为:在学校,我和同学们相处得很好。后一句意为:我有一个一直困扰我的问题。两句话之间存在转折关系,故不可使用Therefore,意为所以,而应该使用带有否定意义的副词,故把therefore改成However。注意大写首字母。

【3】文中第三句。此句句意为:然而,我有一个一直困扰我的问题。这里不需要使用反身代词myself,只需要使用代词的宾格形式作宾语,故把myself改成me。

【4】文中第四句。此句考查among和between之间的区别。Among指三者及三者以上的之间,而between指两者之间。此句指同桌和我之间的关系,故把among改成between。

【5】文中第五句。本句考查名词rule的用法。rule作规章制度讲时是可数名词,如前面没有a等修饰时,常用其复数形式,泛指规章制度。此句句意为:他是一个刻苦的学生,非常遵守学校的规章制度。故用复数形式,把rule改成rules。

【6】文中第七句。本句考查时态。通过阅读上下文可知,本篇文章是以一般现在时为主,陈述目前的情况,而本句突然出现了一般过去时,而且没有讲述过去发生的事情,所以需要把一般过去时改成一般现在时。主要主语为he,故用gets。

【7】文中第八句。本句考查短语deal with的用法。此处deal with表示交往的意思,这个句子的句意为:我不知道该如何与他交往。故使用how表如何,而不用what。

【8】文中第九句。根据后面的we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts可知,这里说明的是两个人关系有问题的原因,所以不用why而用because,构成句型:thats because,表示那是因为。

【9】文中倒数第二句。about为介词,其后之间用代词each other作宾语即可,不需要再使用介词with,故去掉with即可。句意为:我希望我们能多了解彼此,多理解彼此。

【10】文中最后一句。通过than before,可知此句话为比较级,故把close改成closer。句意为:我真希望我们能比以前更亲密。

考点:考查短文纠错

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Aunt Emmy smiled. Aunt Emmy was sixty, and spent the hours she didn't spend in a bed, on a sofa or in a wheel chair; but Aunt Emmy was never heard to sigh.

"The gifts which money can purchase are not the only ones we can give," said Aunt Emmy gently, "nor the best, either."

"Oh, I know it's nicer to give something of your own work," agreed Clorinda, "but materials for fancy work cost too. That kind of gift is just as much out of the question for me as any other."

"That was not what I meant," said Aunt Emmy.

"What did you mean, then?" asked Clorinda, looking puzzled.

Aunt Emmy smiled.

"Suppose you think out my meaning for yourself," she said. "That would be better than if I explained it. Besides, I don't think I could explain it. Take the beautiful line of a beautiful poem to help you in your thinking out: "The gift without the giver is bare."

"I'd put it the other way and say, "The giver without the gift is bare,'" said Clorinda, with a grimace(鬼脸). "That is my predicament(困境) exactly. Well, I hope by next Christmas I'll not be quite bankrupt. I'm going into Mr. Callender's store down at Murraybridge in February. He has offered me the place, you know."

"Won't your aunt miss you terribly?" said Aunt Emmy gravely.

Clorinda flushed. There was a note in Aunt Emmy's voice that disturbed her.

"I think she would rather have your companionship than a part of your salary, Clorinda," said Aunt Emmy. "But of course you must decide for yourself, dear. "

"Well, I must say bye-bye and run home. " Clorinda lived just across the road from Aunt Emmy in a tiny white house behind some huge willows. But Aunt Mary lived there too--the only relative Clorinda had, for Aunt Emmy wasn't really her aunt at all. Clorinda had always lived with Aunt Mary ever since she could remember.

Clorinda puzzled over Aunt Emmy's meaning for four days and part of three nights. Then all at once it came to her. Or if it wasn't Aunt Emmy's meaning it was a very good meaning in itself, and it grew clearer and expanded in meaning during the days that followed, although at first Clorinda shrank a little from some of the conclusions to which it led her.

On Christmas Day, Clorinda went over to Aunt Emmy's. It was a faded brown Christmas after all, for the snow had not come. But Clorinda did not mind; there was such joy in her heart that she thought it the most delightful Christmas Day that ever dawned.

She put the queer cornery armful she carried down on the kitchen floor before she went into the sitting room. Aunt Emmy was lying on the sofa before the fire, and Clorinda sat down beside her.

"I've come to tell you all about it," she said.

Aunt Emmy patted the hand that was in her own.

"From your face, dear girl, it will be pleasant hearing and telling," she said.

Clorinda nodded.

"Aunt Emmy, I thought for days over your meaning ... thought until I was dizzy. And then one evening it just came to me, without any thinking at all, and I knew that I could give some gifts after all. I thought of something new every day for a week. At first I didn't think I could give some of them, and then I thought how selfish I was. I would have been willing to pay any amount of money for gifts if I had had it, but I wasn't willing to pay what I had. I got over that, though, Aunt Emmy. Now I'm going to tell you what I did give. "

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"Yes, thanks to you, Aunt Emmy," said Clorinda softly.

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【2】Which of the following sentences can best explain the line “The gift without the giver is bare.”?

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【3】What is the gift that Clorinda gave to old Aunt Kitty?

A. Passion B. Sympathy C. Kindness D. Company

【4】What does the underlined phrase “in confidene” mean?

A. respectfully B. confidently

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【5】Which two words can best describe Aunt Emmy?

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【6】Which of the following is the best title?

A. A Special Christmas B. Clorinda’s Gifts

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