题目内容
10.假设你是新华中学的学生会主席李华,你校打算邀请某大学知名学者王教授来学校参加毕业典礼并做演讲来鼓励学生努力奋斗,实现自己的梦想.请你给王教授写一封邀请信,内容如下:(1)说明写信目的;
(2)毕业典礼时间:5月27 日;
(3)演讲地点:学校礼堂.
要求:
(1)包括所有要点,可适度发挥,以使行文连贯;
(2)开头已经写好,但不计入总词数;
(3)词数100左右.
毕业典礼演讲:commencement speech
Dear Professor Wang,
My name is Li Hua,president of the Student Union,from Xinhua Middle School.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你是新华中学的学生会主席李华,你校打算邀请某大学知名学者王教授来学校参加毕业典礼并做演讲来鼓励学生努力奋斗,实现自己的梦想.请你给王教授写一封邀请信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:(1)说明写信目的;(2)毕业典礼时间:5月27 日;(3)演讲地点:学校礼堂.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:ask you a favor请求帮忙;be eager to渴望做某事;in advance提前;look forward to盼望
The speech is scheduled to be given on May 27th in the school hall,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts.(高分句型一)
I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule,and I would appreciate it very much if you could come.(高分句型二)
解答 Dear Professor Wang,
My name is Li Hua,president of the Student Union from Xinhua Middle School.I'm writing to ask you a favor.Would you please come to our school and give us a commencement speech?The speech is scheduled to be given on May 27th in the school hall,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts.(高分句型一)We're eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views.
I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule,and I would appreciate it very much if you could come.(高分句型二)Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!
I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
态度一 | 态度二 | 你的观点 |
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2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.