Question

第二节：写作：（满分25分）

国内某家英文报纸设有一个求助信箱（letters to Dr Helper）。请根据一份学生现状中列出的部分信息，以高三学生王勇的名义，用英语给Dr Helper写一封短信。

学生现状：

1．每日在校时间9小时；

2．每日作业时间3-4小时；

3．每日课外活动时间几乎没有；

4．每日睡眠时间不足；

负担过重原因：

考试压力大，作业多，家长期望高。

注意：

1．词数：100左右； 2．信的开头已经给出，不计入要求的词数。

生词：负担过重overload 压力 pressure 期望 expectations 

Dear Dr Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.

                                                                                     

 

                                                                                    

 

                                                                                     

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yong

Answer 1

参考范文：

Dear Dr Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home . We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves,but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides ,we even don’t have enough sleep .

There seems to be three causes about the overload ;the pressure of examinations ,too much homework and the high expectations from the parents . We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.

I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yong

解析:

这是一篇应用文写作（求助信），写作内容与学生日常生活和学习有关。写作要点为：现状和三大负担过重原因（现象），如何减负？