Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

China is a country that playing table tennis is quite popular. Wang Wei is fond about this sport. Malong is one of the great players in the world so that she admires him a lot. Those inspiring story of his success have encouraged children to practice table tennis at early age. Competitions are being organized for schools to compete against each other every year. Last year, Wang Wei was lucky admitted as a school team member. She worked hard and won the first place with her amazed performance. When she received the gold medal, a sense of pride arise in her heart. Since then, she has been dreaming of win more medals in the future.

Answer 1

【答案】that→where

about→of

great→ greatest

story→ stories

at后加an

删除are后的being

lucky→ luckily

amazed→ amazing

arise→ arose

win→ winning

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。乒乓球在中国很流行，学生王薇也很喜爱这项运动，并经过自己的努力在去年的校际比赛中获得金奖。自那刻起，她决心要在以后获得更多的奖项。

1. 考查定语从句。先行词country在从句playing table tennis is quite popular.中充当地点状语，故应用关系副词where。故将that改为where。

2. 考查固定短语。此处考查短语be fond of喜欢，故将about改为of。

3. 考查形容词最高级。根据one of +形容词最高级+名词复数（……中最……的一个）可知，此处应用形容词最高级，故将great改为greatest。

4. 考查名词的数。根据those（那些）判断此处应用名词复数形式，故将story改为stories。

5. 考查冠词。此处考查固定短语at an early age在小时候，故在at后加an。

6. 考查被动语态。根据every year可知此处应用一般现在时的被动语态，即am/is/are done，而不是现在进行时的被动语态，故删除are后的being。

7. 考查副词。此处应用副词修饰动词admitted，故将lucky改为luckily。

8. 考查形容词。此处应用v-ing形式的形容词修饰指物名词performance (表演)，故将amazed改为amazing。

9. 考查时态。根据前文的received判断此处应用一般过去时，故将arise改为arose。

10. 考查动名词。此处应用动名词作为短语dream of(梦想做某事)的宾语，故将win改为winning。