题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, more and more farmers were moving to cities. The farmers have chances in cities as good as difficulties. Of course, there are more opportunity in cities because most of them can find jobs to earn more money. Besides, their children can get a good education and have brighter future. But at the same time, they meet a lot of challenges. Some remains unemployed thus they can not afford to living in cities. As far as I’m concerned, we should do something to help with them. I hope the farmers can live happy in cities.
【答案】1. ... were moving to cities. were → are
2. ... as good as difficulties. good → well
3. ... more opportunity in cities ... opportunity → opportunities
4. ... because most of them ... because → so
5. ... get a good education ... good → better
6. ... have brighter future. brighter前加a
7. Some remains unemployed ... remains → remain
8. ... afford to living ... living → live
9. ... help with them. 去掉with
10. ... can live happy in cities. happy → happily
【解析】1. Nowadays were moving to cities. 中的were → are
考查时态。根据时间状语“Nowadays,”可知,要用现在进行时,故把were 改为 are
2. ... as good as difficulties中的good → well
考查副词状语。句意:农民在城市里的机会和困难一样大。分析句子The farmers have chances in cities as good as difficulties.可知,本句中的good 是修饰动词have chances,修饰动词的应该用副词,故把good改为well.
3. ... more opportunity in cities ... 中的opportunity → opportunities
考查名词复数。根据前面的修饰词more(许多),可知机会很多,要用复数形式,故把opportunity 改为 opportunities
4. ... because most of them ... 中的because → so
考查因果关系。句意:城市里有更多的机会,所以大多数人可以找到工作来赚取更多的钱。根据句意可知,机会多是原因,找工作赚钱是结果,而不是原因。故把because 改为so
5. ... get a good education ... 中的good → better
考查比较级。根据后面的“have brighter future.”可知本句也要用比较级,故把good改为better。
6. ... have brighter future. 中的brighter前加a
考查冠词。他们的孩子可以接受更多的教育,拥有一个更光明的未来。一个光明的未来,要用冠词a.
7. Some remains unemployed ... 中的remains → remain
考查谓语动词。分析句子they meet a lot of challenges. Some remains unemployed thus they can not afford to living in cities. As far可知,本句中的some指的是上文中的一些挑战(challenges),所以一些挑战,是复数,谓语动词要用复数。故把remains 改为 remain。
8. ... afford to living ... 中的living → live
考查固定用法。afford to do…为固定搭配,意为“负担的起做某事,能买的起。。。”,后面要跟动词不定式。所以把afford to living ... 中的living改为live
9. ... help with them. 中的去掉with
考查固定搭配,help sb with sth帮助某人做某事,help sb意为“帮助某人”.,但没有help with them。因此把... help with them. 中的去掉with.
10. ... can live happy in cities. 中的happy → happily
考查副词作状语。分析句子I hope the farmers can live happy in cities.可知,形容词happy在句子中作状语修饰动词 live,修饰动词的要用副词,因此要反can live happy in cities.中的happy 改为happily。