Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意:  1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Alice,

I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest and practicing my English as well. We’ve been written to each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you.I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps you will go out do some sightseeing together.                           

Best,Lily

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 got a good →去掉a

 win→won

 pleasing→pleased

 staying→stay

 place→places

 written→writing

 talk→talking

 at→on

 you →we

 go out∧ do→to

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封信，在信中提到了上周作者赢得国家级绘画比赛的奖励，父亲很高兴先让自己去英国旅游，进而提高一下自己的英语口语，作者梦想者和爱丽丝能面对面的交谈。

 考查冠词。news是不可数名词前面不能用不定冠词修饰。故去掉a.

 考查动词时态。根据时间状语last week，故用过去式won.

 考查形容词。pleasing表示令人高兴的；pleased表示人感觉到高兴的。

 考查动词短语。would like to do 故用stay.

 考查固定短语。places of interest名胜，这是固定短语。

 考查动词时态。这里是现在完成进行时have been doing ，故用writing.

 考查动名词。dream ofdoing 梦想做某事，故用talking.

 考查介词。on vacation在度假中，是固定短语。

 考查代词。根据上文可知应该用we.

 考查动词短语。这是短语go out to do出去做某事。

考点：短文改错。

点评：文中考查了固定短语，形容词、冠词、代词及动词等的用法及意义，需要考生有扎实的基础知识。需要会分析复杂的句子结构进而正确理解短文的意思。