Question

【题目】美国高中生Mike将来北京参加冬令营活动，你家是他的接待家庭。请根据以下提示给Mike写信。

1.机场接机；

2.单独卧室, 可以上网；

3.陪同浏览北京。

注意：1. 词数不少于50.

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month.

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________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Yours,

Joe

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month. We’re going to pick you up at the airport when you arrive. We have arranged a separate room for you, and there is a computer in it. You can get on line whenever you want. I hope you will feel comfortable and convenient here. Beijing has its special beauty in winter. I’d like to be your tour guide in your spare time. Since both of us are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together.

Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Yours,

Joe

【解析】

【试题分析】这是一篇叙述性的书信类写作。根据作文提示的三点内容给Mike写信，清晰表达，并且要不失亮点，准确把握英文句子的书写，避免出现汉语式英语的现象。要求：1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。由于字数限制在50词上下，因此要知道这是一篇篇幅不长的作文，写作内容切莫过于啰嗦要紧扣提示加以说明，同时为了使文章更有水平，要多用一些高级句型。

【亮点说明】这是一篇简短的叙述性的范文。范文依据提示的顺序展开描述。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month.；I hope you will feel comfortable and convenient here.宾语从句；You can get on line whenever you want.主从复合句；Since both of us are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together. since从句等；还采用了一些比较好的短语，正确地加以运用：pick you up接某人，have a lot in common有很多共同之处，in your spare time在某人的空闲时间；如这些都给文章带来了亮点。