Question

7．阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
To many people even the word"work"sounds unpleasant，not necessarily because they are lazy．The same man，who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office，may work hard at the weekend，painting the house or digging the garden．
What is the reason，then？In most cases，it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing．It does not give them any real satisfaction．It may be quite easy，like making up wooden boxes，but it is very boring．Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one，such as attaching a door handle to a car．But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say：I have made something!
Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized．No matter how ordinary a job is，it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect．Society cannot function a single day without the"dull and boring"jobs．
[写作内容]
Ⅰ．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
Ⅱ．以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：
（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；
（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？
（3）你对平凡工作者的看法．
[写作要求]
Ⅰ．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
Ⅱ．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：compared with．（与…..作比较），suffer from（遭受），spread at a very quick speed（以很快的速度蔓延），I draw the conclusion（得出结论），go smoothly（流畅地进行），insignificant（微不足道的）．

解答 In the passage，the author mainly stresses the importance of small and ordinary work，such as cleaning the street．Because of their essentiality for the organization of the society，he thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly．（概括）
There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is harder compared with any other jobs in the society．【高分句型】On one hand，they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are still in the sweet sleeping dreams．On the other hand，they also suffer from less respect and lower pay，working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow，wind heavily．【高分句型】（清洁工工作的艰辛）
Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city．Wherever we go，there is rubbish．Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish．Ever worse，if there were no change about that，disease would spread at a very quick speed．Is there anything that can be worse than this!（假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何）
From the above，I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job，such as cleaning the street，is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly．Consequently，those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respect as much as those being engineers or teachers．（对平凡工作者的看法）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．