Question

　　下面这段材料是一个故事的结局。请你根据本段材料，展开充分合理的想像，写出故事的形状。

　　Jack came home very late，which made his mother very angry．When Jack told her what he had done on the way home， his mother smiled praised him．

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One day，Jack was on the way to①home after class．He was walking on the road by the river bank when he heard somebody crying for help nearby．He looked around and find②a little girl struggling in the water．The little girl fall③into the river when she was playing by the river bank，At the sight of this，Jack took off his clothes and jumped into the river．The little girl saved④．But the girl stayed⑤in the water so long that she lost her consciousness．Jack stopped a taxi and took her to a hospital．After the treatment the little girl could say⑥．Jack didn't leave the hospital until the girl's parents arrived．They were very thankful to him． 　　Jack came home very late，which made his mother very angry．When Jack told her what he had done on the way home，his mother smiled and praised him． 　　修改：①去掉to　home为副词，前面不能用介词to。 　　②find→found　found和looked是并列谓语。 　　③fall→fell　此处需用一般过去时态。 　　④saved前加was　此句应为被动语态。 　　⑤stayed前加had　stayed动作发生在was saved动作之前，故用过去完成时态。 　　⑥say→speak　say侧重“说”的内容，而speak则强调“说话”的能力。 　　评点：该文想像丰富，合乎情理。审题到位，主题明确，语言流畅，条理清楚。运用了较多的语法结构和英语句型。虽然存在一些语言错误，但有效地运用了语句间的连接成份，不失为一篇佳作。