Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, that was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, although he was born in China. It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy collecting stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 have改为had

 that改为who

 at改为at

 he改为she

 interested改为interested

 All改为both

  crazy后加about

 去the

 harder改为hard

 laughing改为laugh

【解析】

 have改为had        考查动词的时态。句意当我在中学时，我有一个很好的同学。指的是过去，故用一般过去时。

 that改为who        考查定语从句。我有一个同学，他是我遇到的第一位外国人。先行词是classmate,因为是非限制性定语从句，故只能用who来引导。

 at改为at            考查固定短语。Be good at 擅长。

 he改为she           考查人称代词。句意 她擅长三国语言，尽管她出生在中国。上句话中出现的是she,故前后保持一致。

 interested改为 interested考查形容词 句意 他的父亲是法国人而他的母亲是英国人，这件事是非常有趣的，it 是代指这件事，故用interesting来修饰。

 All改为both           考查代词。句意 她的父母在大学教书。她的父母两者 故用both.

  crazy后加about        考查固定短语。Be crazy about 对。。疯狂。

 去the                  考查冠词。球类前面不加冠词。

 harder改为hard         考查形容词。句意 她的梦想是工程师，所以她努力学习去实现。没有比较级故去掉。

 laughing改为laugh      考查固定短语。Make sb do 让某人做某事，故用动词原形。

考点   短文改错。