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19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线（　　），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
A Frenchman is once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English．So after he left his hotel，he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying．Then he walked on．At last，he got lost．In several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn't know the name of his hotel，however he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read："One-way street"．

Answer 1

分析 一位法国人去伦敦旅游，他想走着去看看这个城市，但他怕会迷路，因为他不懂英语，所以走出宾馆他在第一个路口记下了他所在的地方．然后他继续走，最后他真的迷路了，几个小时后他找到了一个警察，这个法国人费了很大劲向警察解释他不知道宾馆的名字，但他知道那条路的名字，然后他把在笔记本上记下的给警察看，结果上面写着"单行道"．

解答 A Frenchman is once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English．So after he left his hotel，he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying．Then he walked on．At last，he got lost．In several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain∧the policeman that he didn't know the name of his hotel，however he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read："One-way street"．
1．去掉is并把visiting改为visited；考查动词时态．全文讲述一个法国人游览伦敦的过去经历．因此文章的主要时态是一般过去时．
2．a改为the；考查冠词的用法．这里应当是指伦敦这个城市，故要用定冠词the表示特指．
3．去掉being；考查动词短语．get lost意为"迷路，走失"．
4．on改为at；考查介词的用法．at the corner意为"在角落"．
5．names改为name；考查名词的单复数．记录他停留的这条街道的名字．故name要用单数形式．
6．In改为After；考查介词的用法．以过去时间为起点谈"以后"，用介词after．
7．explain后面加to；考查动词的用法．explain to somebody something意为"向某人解释什么"．
8．however改为but/yet；考查连词的用法．however用在句中，要用逗号隔开，属于句子之间的转折．句内转折多用but/yet，而且不用逗号隔开．
9．that改为what；考查宾语从句．分析句意为"他向警察展示自己笔记本里所记录的街道名字"，从句缺少主语，故用what作宾语从句的主语．
10．去掉was；考查动词的语态．笔记本上写道，用read表达，无被动意思．

点评 短文改错时要先通读全文，整体理解短文的基本大意，然后分析句子间的结构关系，运用所掌握的基本语言知识从细节上加以分析，找出文中的错误并加以改正．