第二节短文写作假设你是李华.你在某国外旅游论坛上看到有关2010年世博会的话题.请你写一篇120词左右的英文帖子.包括以下内容: 1.第41届世博会将于2010年5月1日至10月31日在上海举行.主题为“城市让生活更美好 , 2.这一时期上海气温适宜.阳光充足.风力较小.是进行户外活动和旅游的理想季节, 3.上海作为主办城市.将会迎来更多的发展机题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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第二节短文写作（满分25分）

假设你是李华，你在某国外旅游论坛上看到有关2010年世博会的话题。请你写一篇120词左右的英文帖子，包括以下内容：

1、第41届世博会将于2010年5月1日至10月31日在上海举行，主题为“城市让生活更美好”；

2、这一时期上海气温适宜，阳光充足，风力较小，是进行户外活动和旅游的理想季节；

3、上海作为主办城市，将会迎来更多的发展机会；

4、作为一名中学生，你要学好英语，希望能成为志愿者来帮助外国朋友了解上海。

参考词汇：世博会 the World Expo

One possible version：

As we all know, the 41st World Expo will be held from May 1st to October 31st in 2010 in Shanghai, China, with the theme of “Better City, Better Life.” At this time of the year, it’s neither too hot nor too cold in Shanghai. It is quite sunny and the wind is gentle, so it’s the best time to join in outdoor activities and travel here. Our government has promised that the 2010 World Expo will be the best one ever. As the host city, Shanghai will have more opportunities to develop quickly.

As a high school student, I’ll try to learn English well so that I can be a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.

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