Question

第Ⅱ卷（共35分）

第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

         此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

         此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

         此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

         此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

         注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Julia,

         You said in your letter that you are always trying to improve        76．            

your English, and your English teacher didn’t appear to appreciate    77．            

your efforts．So you felt disappointing and lost the desire to learn            78．            

English．You know teachers are very busy and maybe your teacher           79．            

is struggled to provide personal attention for all the students           80．            

in their class．In my opinion, it is a fact of life that sometimes          81．            

people’s hard work went unnoticed．Though it is nice to receive    82．            

encouragement and support, parts of growing up is learning to be            83．            

motivated and study independently．So keep on to working hard             84．            

at your English because you stop, you are sure to fail．             85．            

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

76． are → were    77． and → but   

78．disappointing → disappointed

79． 正确    80． struggled → struggling   

81．their → your   82．went → goes  83． parts → part   

84．去掉to    85． because 后加if