Question

【题目】假设你是某大学的学生许浙。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示，写一篇精选演讲稿。

1.个人优势介绍（如性格、特长等）

2. 组织校内活动的感想（如举办讲座等）；

3.组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办演讲比赛等）

4.表达当选的愿望或决心。

注意：词数不少于100；请勿提及真实学校名称；可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯。开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：vice president

Good afternoon, my dear friends.

My name is Xu Zhe.______________________________________________________________

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Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, my dear friends.

My name is Xu Zhe. It’s I who would like to run for the position, vice president of our school English club.

As is known to everyone, I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management. In order to make our school life more abundant and colorful, I can manage to hold some interesting lectures and English parties. What’s more, I shall hold some competitions, such as a debate on how to study efficiently and an English speech contest to improve our ability to communicate with each other.

I’d appreciate it if I could be chosen; I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿写作，这篇演讲稿主要是作者对于校英语俱乐部选举新一届副主席，竞选而作的演讲。演讲的内容主要包括个人优势介绍、组织校内活动的感想、组织校际交流活动的设想以及表达当选的愿望或决心等，这些介绍、感想和愿望等，都应该表达得具体而真实。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。注意多使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。【亮点说明】

It’s I who would like to run for the position, vice president of our school English club.使用who引导的定语从句。

As is known to everyone, I once served as monitor in Junior school and won the top monitor in Junior 2, so I have strengths in management.使用so引导的非限制性定语从句。最后一句I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.使用whatever 引导的宾语从句。这些高级句型的使用，使得文章的水平更加高级。serve as，In order to，manage to，What’s more，such as等词组的使用，使得文章更加生动。run for the position，won the top monitor，make our school life more abundant and colorful，hold some interesting lectures and English parties，

lend a hand to others等短语的使用，使得文章表达更加准确和到位，也为文章增添了活泼气氛。开头部分：简明扼要的说明自己的演讲目标。正文部分：讲述自己曾经担任班长和组织英语演讲等活动，说明自己竞选的努力。结尾部分：表达自己希望被选中的愿望和以及被选中之后的决心。