Question

【题目】请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Sharing is good for ourselves as well as others.

注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;

②除诗歌外，文体不限;

③内容必须结合自己生活中的具体事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

⑤词数不少于150字。

Answer 1

【答案】

Just as the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” Giving others what you have means more than being generous. As a matter of fact, it has a magic power which doubles your happiness and reduces your sadness by half.

I can well remember the first few months after I entered senior school, I felt it really hard to keep up with the teaching pace in pace, as a result of which I couldn’t take down notes. By coincidence, my friend had the same confusion. The problem kept bothering us until she suggested a wonderful solution. In the days that followed, we set aside some time in the afternoon to check notes, share what we had and make up the missing details. It turned out to be a wise decision because both of us could listen to the teacher with full attention without worrying about missing any points.

From my own experience, I learned the importance of sharing: since we are not living in an isolated island, sharing becomes extremely important especially when we meet with difficulties in life. So please don’t hesitate to share your joy and pain with others , and you are sure to gain.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于开放性作文，题目要求根据所给提示，结合生活事例写一篇短文。注意不得照抄提示语。使用第一人称进行写作，注意不要出现拼写和标点错误。选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时要赋予变化。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。亮点说明：本文运用了一些比较好的短语，例如：As a matter of fact，pace in pace，By coincidence，turned out to be等，其句型也可谓是精彩纷呈，比如时间状语从句的使用：The problem kept bothering us until she suggested a wonderful solution；定语从句的使用：it has a magic power which doubles your happiness and reduces your sadness by half；一些连词的使用使得句子间通顺流畅，如since, so ,and等;谚语的使用：Roses given, fragrance in hand。