Question

16．假定你是高三学生李华，你的美国朋友彼得写信询问你的高考志愿．请你用英语回信介绍以下情况：
1．你准备报考哪所大学；2．该大学简介；3．你为什么选择该大学．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
Thanks for your email．Yes，I'm facing one of the most important choices in my life．               
Bye for now．
All the best，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英语回信介绍以下情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你准备报考哪所大学；该大学简介；你为什么选择该大学．2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：decide to do sth．决定做某事；be located in 坐落于、位于??????；can't wait to do sth．迫不及待地想要做某事；come true （梦想）实现；continue doing sth．继续做某事
Located in the coastal city of Xiamen in the southeast，it is quite a famous university in China．（高分句型一）
To make my dream come true．I'll have to continue working hard in the next few months．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Peter．
    Thanks for your email．Yes．I'm facing one of the most important choices in my life．After lots of thinking and consulting，I've finally decided to go to Xiamen University．Located in the coastal city of Xiamen in the southeast，it is quite a famous university in China．（高分句型一）I am tired of the dry plain here，especially the smog!I can't wait to breathe the fresh air and see the green trees and beautiful flowers!Besides，Xiamen University is just right for me．I believe I can do well enough in the College Entrance Exam to be accepted．To make my dream come true．I'll have to continue working hard in the next few months．（高分句型二） Bye for now．
    All the best．
                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．