Question

3．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike想了解你校开设的新课程《通用技术》的情况，你向他作如下的介绍：
1．这门课旨在提高学生的实际运用能力；
2．通过这门课的学习，你已经学会了修理、设计和制作一些物品；
3．你的感受．
注意：1．词数不少于100；
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4．通用技术-General Technology
Dear Mike，
Thank you for your letter asking about the General Technology，a new course that…
                                  
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于学校开设的新课程《通用技术》的情况的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表明写信的目的；二解释这门课的目的；三介绍通过这门课程自己学到的东西；四叙述自己的感受．
高分句型：
1．I can even repair some things that are broken in my house and community．句子里 that 引导定语从句，代指先行词some things．
我甚至能修理家里和社区坏了的东西．
2．In my opinion，we will benefit from such a practical course and we will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way．句子里benefit from 表示"从…获益"；acquire表示"获得"．
依我看来，我们将会从这样的实用课程里获益，并且用一种有趣的方式获得更多的知识．

解答 Dear Mike，
  Thank you for your letter asking about the General Technology，a new course that we are taking at school．Here is something about it．（表明写信的目的）The new course aims to teach us students basic technical skills and improve our designing ability．（解释这门课的目的）From the course，I have learned to use various types of common tools safely．I can even repair some things that are broken in my house and community．【高分句型一】What's more，I can design and make an item that is useful in our daily life．We also have to attend a written test for the course before graduation．（介绍通过这门课程自己学到的东西）In my opinion，we will benefit from such a practical course and we will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way．【高分句型二】We enjoy it mainly because the course is closely related to our everyday life．（叙述自己的感受）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，在确定了时态人称以及内容要点以后，根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇．在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚．