Question

第II卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum(流浪汉)in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

Answer 1

Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the
toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say,
him                                              said
“There’s a bum (流浪汉) in ^ toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person
the                                    passed
to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver ^ told that there was a bomb
was
in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came,
immediately
they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a
and
result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police
miles                   With
searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

解析