Question

How to survive embarrassing moments? Have you ever accidently called your teacher Mum, or dropped your plate in your canteen(食堂) while everyone was looking at you? At that moment, you probably wished you could disappear into thin air. Unfortunately, embarrassing things happen to everyone at one time or another.

每个人都会经历尴尬时刻。请记叙一件你经历的尴尬事件。

要求：1. 要举事例。

2. 不少于120字。

3. 友情提示：

文章的开头要总说引起下文，接着举例，最后要写自己尴尬时刻的心理活动和感受。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

We cannot deny the fact that something embarrassing has ever happens to us everyone . Just as the saying goes , nobody can avoid making mistakes , thus nobody experiencing embarrassing moments .

When it comes to the topic , what impressed me most is that I didn’t realize she is a stranger until i turned back to say “ good bye”. That day , my friend, Jane , saw me off on the train station . I was so absorbed in telling something interesting to her that I didn’t even know when we were departed. It was in that moment that I realized I was talking with the wrong person . I felt so embarrassed that I wanted to run to the platform to escape from the scene , but I know I shouldn’t do like that. As a result ,I do nothing but make apologies . To my surprise , the woman gave me a warm smile and said she was happy when listening to my talking . From then on , I learn from her ,giving them a favor rather than laughing when they are embarrassed.

It is kind of the woman . Although she is a stranger ,she helps me out when finding I was in embarrassment . At the same time , she taught me a lesson that we can’t avoid embarrassing moments ,but we can help them out of embarrassment with giving kind words to response.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据中文和英文提示并结合自身生活实例写一篇短文。英文提示语意思是“怎么样度过尴尬的时刻？你是否曾经偶然将你的老师错误地喊成‘妈妈’，或者在食堂里众目睽睽之下你不小心将盘子掉地上了？在那一刻，你是不是想找个洞钻进去，消失在他们面前。不幸的是，尴尬的事总是会时不时发生在每个人身上”记叙你的一件尴尬的事件，要举事例，字数不得少于120字，同时要求文章开头要总说引起下文，接着举例，最后写自己的心理活动和感受。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文中对于“尴尬”这一词的表达用了多种形式的表达，“something embarrassing has ever happens to us everyone ，”“I felt so embarrassed，”“I was in embarrassment，”多种形式表达同一种意思，避免重复，可以使文章变化多样，避免单调乏味；

范文中使用了较多的语法知识，非限定性定语从句as the saying goes，同位语从句the fact that something embarrassing has……a lesson that we can’t avoid…….,省略句thus nobody experiencing embarrassing moments，when finding I was , 主语，表语，宾语从句what impressed me most is that I didn’t realize she is a stranger until i turned back to say “ good bye”，时间状语从句when they are embarrassed.,强调句It was in that moment that I realized I was talking with the wrong person .非谓语giving kind words to response.结果状语从句I felt so embarrassed that I wanted ，I was so absorbed in telling something interesting to her that I didn’t ，固定句型结构，when it comes to…, we cannot deny the fact that, not… until…等。 非限定性定语从句，同位语从句，,强调句，主语，表语，宾语从句等语法的使用提升了文章的档次，同时也显示较高的语法知识点使用能力；

范文中注意使用了thus， That day，From then on，As a result， Although， At the same time , 增加了文章的连贯性，使文章上下联系紧密；

范文中使用了一些固定短语: make mistakes, saw sb off ,be absorbed in doing ,escape from , To my surprise , give sb a favor, help sb out等丰富了文章的内容，使文章更加充实完整。

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