Question

假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。你的英国朋友Tom因为工作忙没有看奥运比赛，所以发e-mail向你了解刘翔因脚伤退赛的相关信息。请根据下列要点，用英文给Tom回一封电子邮件。

要点：

1．2008年8月18日刘翔因脚伤退赛；

2．你深感惋惜；

3．表示将继续支持刘翔；

4．祝愿刘翔早日伤愈，重返赛场。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计你所写词数）。

Dear Tom,

You said in your e-mail that you didn’t watch the Olympic Games because of your busy work and wanted to know something about Liu Xiang’s quitting the men’s 110-meter hurdles…

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

You said in your e-mail that you didn’t watch the Olympic Games because of your busy work and wanted to know something about Liu Xiang’s quitting the men’s 110-meter hurdles.    

August 18th should have been the most exciting day in 2008. However, it has been the saddest and most astonishing day. It was a great pity that LiuXiang got out of the match. At that moment, the whole world was shocked. LiuXiang cried. Because of the injured foot, he missed the most important match in his life.

However, we must support Liu Xiang. He is such a great hero to so many people around the world. I pray that he feels and senses the great respect that millions of people worldwide feel for him. I sincerely hope that he’ll recover and come back again. I am in firm belief that he will be the hero forever, at least in my heart!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

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