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18.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词. 修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
As we know,water is very important to the man.We can't live with water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink are less and less.So some people don't care about it.They waste a lot of waters in their daily life.Even better,they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers,either.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluting.Something must be done stop the pollution.Only in this way can we live happily.If they don't save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of ours.

分析 我们知道水对人类是非常重要的,没有水我们就不能生存.适合饮用的水越来越少,但有些人不关心它.许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染.因此,我们必须采取某些措施来阻止污染.

解答 As we know,water is very important to the man.We can't live with water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink are less and less.So some people don't care about it.They waste a lot of waters in their daily life.Even better,they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers,either.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluting.Something must be done∧stop the pollution.Only in this way can we live happily.If they don't save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of ours.
详解:
1.去掉the 考查冠词.man用作不可数名词时,可表示"人类",可与manmankind换用,其前常不加冠词,作为单数名词跟单数动词连用.
2.with改为without 考查介词.根据句意:没有水我们不能生存.用介词without.
3.are改为is 考查主谓一致.主语The amount是单数形式,谓语动词也应用单数形式is.
4.So改为But 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非因果关系,用连词but.
5.waters改为water 考查名词.water作"水"讲时,是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
6.better改为worse 考查形容词比较级.根据句意:更糟糕的是.用形容词比较级worse.
7.either改为too 考查词语用法.either和too都意为"也",either用于否定句,too用于肯定句,本句是肯定句,用too.
8.polluting改为polluted 考查动词语态.主语Many rivers and lakes和谓语动词pollute是动宾关系,要用一般现在时的被动语态.
9.加to 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式表示目的,作目的状语.
10.they改为we 考查代词.此处的we与前一句中Only in this way can we live happily的we应一致,表示泛指.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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