题目内容
【题目】书面表达
你的美国笔友Lucy来信告知她寒假期间将来京旅游,打算买几个风筝作为纪念品(souvenir)带回美国。请你根据以下提示给Lucy写回信。
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 就她购买纪念品的计划说说你的看法;
3. 推荐一个你认为最值得参观的古迹,并说明原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
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Best wishes!
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
I learned about your plan from your mail. Welcome to Beijing! I’m so happy that I can see you soon. You said you’re going to buy several kites as souvenir. I think that’s a good idea. Kites were invented in China. They represent Chinese culture. As for your tour in Beijing, I suggest you pay a visit to the Forbidden City, which used to be the Palace while the emperors ruled China. I believe you will be amazed by the ancient buildings there.
I hope you’ll have a good time during your stay in Beijing. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes!
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是写一封信,重点给Lucy写回信。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行写作。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信的格式。
【亮点说明】本文按照提纲要求,层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如宾语从句I’m so happy that I can see you soon. You said you’re going to buy several kites as souvenir.定语从句 I suggest you pay a visit to the Forbidden City, which used to be the Palace while the emperors ruled China.