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5．最近，你校学生就是否应该举办各种文艺汇演活动进行了讨论并分别有不同的看法．请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍相关情况并发表自己的观点．

部分同学赞成	1．可以丰富课余生活，缓解学习压力； 2．可以加深同学之间的了解，同时培养学生各方面的能力； 3．可以展示自我，赢得尊重．
部分同学反对	1．排练浪费时间，影响学业； 2．节目有限，表演人数少； 3．活动结束后，产生垃圾多．
你的观点	…（至少两点）

注意：
1．文章的开头已给出，可根据内容适当发挥；
2．词数：120词左右（不包括已给开头）；
3．文中不得提及本人的相关信息．
4．参考词汇：缓解relieve（v．）排练rehearse（v．）表演 performance（n．）
Students in our school have held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to hold parties to celebrate different festivals．Opinions vary from person to person．Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．（高分句型1）Besides，not only does holding activities help them know each other better but it improves their abilities．What's more，some can display themselves and earn respect．（赞成及其原因）
However，some students hold a different view．Firstly，it will take a lot of time to rehearse，which affects their study．Secondly，the list of performance is limited and only a small number of students have the opportunity to take part in it．Thirdly，a lot of waste is produced after the activity，which is harmful to the environment．（反对及其原因）
Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．（高分句型2）At the same time，our classmates may have a really great time by enjoying my performance．（作者的看法及原因）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇议论文，要根据三点要求来完成，分别是 1．引出主题；2．不同同学的看法及其原因：可以丰富课余生活，缓解学习压力；可以加深同学之间的了解，同时培养学生各方面的能力；可以展示自我，赢得尊重；3．你的观点及原因．写作时要注意以下几点：1、写作内容涵盖所有要点，不可遗漏；2、要注意时态语态，避免出现语法和拼写错误；3、适当运用高级词汇和句型来为自己的文章增色．
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和词汇为文章增色不少，比如1、热点话题：a heated discussion  2、释放学习压力relieve some study pressure等．还运用了一些从句使得文章结构更加严谨合理，如Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．和 Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．是非限制定语从句，也是一句长句等．

解答 Students in our school have held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to hold parties to celebrate different festivals．Opinions vary from person to person．（引出主题）
Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．（高分句型1）Besides，not only does holding activities help them know each other better but it improves their abilities．What's more，some can display themselves and earn respect．（赞成及其原因）
However，some students hold a different view．Firstly，it will take a lot of time to rehearse，which affects their study．Secondly，the list of performance is limited and only a small number of students have the opportunity to take part in it．Thirdly，a lot of waste is produced after the activity，which is harmful to the environment．（反对及其原因）
Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．（高分句型2）At the same time，our classmates may have a really great time by enjoying my performance．（作者的看法及原因）

点评 图表类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要积累短语和重要句型．