Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gasses and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.

As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.

Answer 1

【答案】1. condition→conditions

2. convenient前加a

3. 去掉more

4. made→makes

5. up→off

6. much→many

7. lack→lacking

8. careful→carefully

9. As→Even

10. it→them

【解析】1. 句意：随着人们生活条件的发展。生活条件通常用复数，故把condition改为conditions。

2. 句意：它是一种方便的、快捷的和舒适的交通方式。means表示“方式”，是可数名词，这里表示“一种方式”，故要在convenient前加a。

3. 表示“更强壮”，比较级为stronger，more为多余，故去掉。

4. 根据全文时态为一般现在时，主语为it，故把made改为makes。

5. give up是“放弃”的意思，这里表示汽车放出尾气，故把up改为off。

6. 修饰可数名词用many，不用much，故把much改为many。

7. lack parking lots“缺乏停车位”在这里作主语，故要把lack改为lacking。

8. 此处修饰think，应该用副词。

9. 前一句说要我们在买车之前仔细考虑，所以用as if （好像）不符合逻辑，用even if（尽管，即使）符合。

10. 此处代指从句中的cars，要用them而不是it。