Question

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　　假设你是李华，昨天学校为你们举办了十八岁成人仪式。请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件，描述仪式过程并简述你的感受。

1．成人宣誓；

2．感谢家长和老师的教育和培养；

3．老师送贺卡；

4．表演节目。

注意：

1．邮件必须包括以上要点，要适当发挥；

2．词数：100左右；

3．开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考单词：宣誓make an oath仪式ceremony

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

Dear Tom, 　　It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life. Yours, Li Hua

提示：

写作指导： 把握下列描写场景作文常用的表达： We hold a ________ ceremony for _________. 我们举行了……仪式。 We make an oath that… 我们宣誓…… We should have a sense of duty for our society. 我们应对社会负起责任。 go through hardships to历经辛苦…… put on wonderful performances表演了丰富的节目 We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life. 我们受益匪浅，它对我们很重要，我会铭记我生命的这一天。