Question

假如你班要以“如何为高考做准备”为题召开一次主题班会。请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议：

    1.保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还有增强克服困难的勇气；

2.目标明确，正确评价自己；

3.与父母、老师或同学沟通，帮忙走出困境；

4.作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。

注意：1.词数：120 左右，开头结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）；

      2.参考词汇： 明确的：definite     评价：estimation

No doubt every Senor 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination.

                                                                         

With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

No doubt every Senior 3student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.

First, it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we’re in trouble. Finally, striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.

With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的话题是如何为高考做准备，是考生较为熟悉的身边就发生的事情，有话可说。是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】这篇文章有一些高级词汇和复杂句型：it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely.这句话使用形式主语。句中还有enable, overcome, bravely等高级词汇。Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done.是一个很好的倒装句式。还有文章用了first, meanwhile和Besides,这样的词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考察提纲类作文