Question

书面表达（满分30分）

假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。

注意：

1.短文词数不少于100；

2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.

　　Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

　　At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文写作，重点考查考生的书面表达的能力。做家务的话题应该是中学生熟悉，有话可写的素材，因此难度并不大。题目以周记的形式展现，要求考生先介绍做家务的理由，再介绍做家务的过程，最后写出自己的感受。考生在写作时，一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作，三个要点都十分重要，如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上，抓住语言的准确性，再写出几个亮点词汇和句式，得到高分应该比较轻松。

【亮点说明】Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.这句话是现在分词做状语， Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? 这句话用了同位语从句， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 这句话里面用了词组：put sth in place把…布置得井井有条， Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 这句话用了倒装句，还有文章用了Firstly， After that这样的词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查提纲类短文