题目内容
20.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
The teenage year from 13to 19were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didn't seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn whenever I need help.
分析 作者在本文中回忆了自己13岁到19岁时的时候,自己以为什么都知道,可以自己拿主意了,但是父母却不这样认为,所以作者很反感.等离开父母上了大学,重要自己独立了,却又想得到父母的帮助.
解答 The teenage year from 13to 19were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didn't seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn∧whenever I need help.
详解:
1.year改为years;考查名词复数,year是可数名词,13到19岁是复数概念,故用years.
2.worse改为worst;考查形容词最高级,and连接两个最高级形式做并列成分.
3.the去掉;考查固定搭配,at first是固定短语,意为"起初,开始".
4.yourself改为myself;考查反身代词,这里指作者自己做决定,反身代词应与主语I保持一致,故用myself.
5.such改为so;考查近义词辨析,such是形容词,修饰名词或代词,此处用so指代上一句的内容,意为"我的父母似乎不这样认为".
6.tell改为told;考查动词的时态,文章通篇用一般过去时回忆过去的事,故此处也要用一般过去时told.
7.freely改为free;考查形容词,此处用形容词做系动词be的表语.
8.wear改为wearing;考查非谓语动词,介词by后面跟名词或动名词形式,此处意为"通过(某种方式)".
9.to改为for;考查介词,leave for是固定搭配,for后面跟目的地,此处指"离开家去大学",college是目的地,故用for.
10.turn后面加to;考查固定短语,turn to 此处意为"求助于",句中my parents作turn to的宾语.
点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思,抓住中心思想,结合语境和上下文关系,充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配,习惯用法,句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处,加以修正.
A. | being | B. | there will be | C. | there to be | D. | there being |
A. | answer for | B. | apply for | C. | account for | D. | apologize for |
A. | looking into | B. | looking up | C. | looking out | D. | looking for |
A. | the one | B. | the ones | C. | that | D. | which |
At a gathering,we were all telling stories of our most embarrassing moments.It came around to Frank.
Frank began to tell us of his childhood."I (41)Bin San Pedro.My Dad was a fisherman,and he
loved the sea.He had his own boat,but it was(42)A making a living on the sea.He worked hard and would stay out until he caught enough to (43)C the family."
He looked at us and said,"I (44)D you could have met my Dad.He was a big man,and he was strong from pulling the nets and fighting the seas for the (45)A.When you got close to him,he (46)Clike the ocean.He would wear his old coat and his overalls.No matter how much my mother(47)Bthem,they would still smell of the sea and of fish."
Frank's voice dropped a bit."When the weather was bad he would (48)A me to school.He had this old truck that was older than he was(49)D he would drive toward the school,I would shrink down into the seat hoping to disappear.He would(50)Cright in front of the school gate,and it seemed like everybody (51)Bbe standing around and watching.Then he would (52)A over and give me a big kiss on the cheek and tell me to be a good boy.It was so (53)C for me.I was twelve years old,and my Dad would lean over and kiss me goodbye!"
He(54)Band then went on,"I remember the day when I said'No'"
It was the first time I had ever talked to him that(55)D,and he had this surprised look on his face.I said,'Dad,I'm too(56)A for a goodbye kiss.'
My Dad looked at me for the longest time,and his eyes started to tear up.I had never seen him(57)C.
He turned and looked out the windshield(挡风玻璃).'You're right,'he said.'You are a big boy…a man.I won't kiss you anymore.'"
Frank got a sad look on his face,and the tears began to (58)C in his eyes,as he spoke."It wasn't long after that when my Dad went to sea and never came back."
Tears were running down Frank's cheeks.He spoke again."Guys,you don't know what I would(59)Bto have my Dad give me just one more kiss on the cheek…to feel his rough old face…to smell the ocean on him…to feel his arm around my neck.I wish I had been a man then.If I had been a(60)D,I would never have told my Dad I was too old for a goodbye kiss."
41.A.kept up | B.grew up | C.came up | D.started up |
42.A.hard | B.absurd | C.easy | D.necessary |
43.A.remove | B.reach | C.feed | D.urge |
44.A.prefer | B.request | C.suggest | D.wish |
45.A.fish | B.favorite | C.benefit | D.glory |
46.A.sounded | B.looked | C.smelled | D.felt |
47.A.processed | B.washed | C.handled | D.managed |
48.A.drive | B.limit | C.adapt | D.devote |
49.A.Before | B.After | C.Since | D.As |
50.A.back up | B.pick up | C.pull up | D.speed up |
51.A.could | B.Would | C.Should | D.might |
52.A.lean | B.hold | C.run | D.watch |
53.A.frightening | B.challenging | C.embarrassing | D.entertaining |
54.A.recovered | B.paused | C.requested | D.admitted |
55.A.day | B.time | C.aspect | D.way |
56.A.old | B.delighted | C.anxious | D.proud |
57.A.sigh | B.shout | C.cry | D.yell |
58.A.break down | B.hold back | C.well up | D.start off |
59.A.demand | B.give | C.rush | D.infer |
60.A.boy | B.seaman | C.backbone | D.man |
A. | acquire | B. | convey | C. | investigate | D. | remark |