假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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18．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Mr．Green is a London taxi driver who love going to the theater．Last week his mother gave him two tickers for play．The tickets were for Sunday evening．Then Mr．Green read some reviews of the play，that said it was a terribly one!He wouldn't go to see the play that no one liked．So two hours after the beginning of the play，he left the tickets on the back seat of his taxi．He thought perhaps someone who wants to see the play would take it．However，when Mr．Green went back to home，the tickets were still there．On fact，there were four tickets on the seat．Someone had placed another pair of ticket on top of them!

分析本文主要讲述格林先生喜欢去戏院．上周他母亲给他两张票，他看了评论说这个剧很可怕，便在开演前两小时将票放在车的后座上，让想看的人拿去．但当他回家时一看，不仅自己的票在那儿，还多出了两张票．

解答 Mr．Green is a London taxi driver who love going to the theater．Last week his mother gave him two tickers for∧play．The tickets were for Sunday evening．Then Mr．Green read some reviews of the play，that said it was a terribly one!He wouldn't go to see the play that no one liked．So two hours after the beginning of the play，he left the tickets on the back seat of his taxi．He thought perhaps someone who wants to see the play would take it．However，when Mr．Green went back to home，the tickets were still there．On fact，there were four tickets on the seat．Someone had placed another pair of ticket on top of them!
详解：
1．love改为loves 考查主谓一致．此处表示的是一般事实，用一般现在时态，且主语who与先行词driver一致，用单数形式loves．
2．加a 考查冠词．play是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
3．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词reviews在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
4．terribly改为terrible 考查形容词．one指代the play，要用形容词修饰．
5．after改为before 考查介词．根据句意：在剧开始前两小时．用介词before．
6．wants改为wanted 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．it改为them 考查代词．them指代上文提到的the tickets．
8．去掉to 考查词语用法．此处home是副词，其前不接介词．
9．On改为In 考查介词．in fact意为"实际上，其实"，是固定搭配．
10．ticket改为tickets 考查名词复数．ticket是可数名词，其前有a pair of修饰时用复数形式．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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9．NBA basketball players devote much of their lives to preparing for games．This preparation，which includes studying game films，practicing skills and treating injuries，is essential because of the pressure-packed nature of their profession．
（36）GGenerally，on the day of a game，players get together in the morning for an hour shooting and also to review films of the opponent of that night．（37）F Players receive treatments for injuries，put on their uniforms，discuss strategies（策略） with coaches and warm up during the remaining time before the game gets underway．As thousands of people cheer them on，a team's best players will play 40 or more minutes during the game．After the game，some players stick around to lift weights before showering and heading home．
（38）A They must leave their families at home，spend hours on planes traveling around the country and try to stay rested while sleeping at a different hotel every night．
The NBA's 82-game regular season is tiring．（39）C So many players focus on recuperating（恢复） for at least part of the off-season．Other players，may work on recovering from surgery to correct injuries．
Weeks before the training camp，NBA basketball players start getting back in shape for the upcoming season．（40）E Younger players often take part in developmental leagues during the summer months to increase their chances of getting onto an NBA team．

A．Trips can be difficult for NBA basketball players．
B．The league was founded in New York City on June 6，1946．
C．It can even make the best-conditioned athletes tired．
D．It consists of 30 teams，29 in the US and 1in Canada．
E．The preparation may involve practicing basketball skills and lifting weights．
F．Following lunch，many players take a nap and eat a pre-game meal before arriving at the field．
G．An NBA basketball player's typical workday routine varies based on his team's schedule of games．

6．-Was the proposal passed at yesterday's meeting？
-Yes，but some members of the committee expressed ．（　　）

13．Due to heavy fog，there was a delay in the departure of our plane．（←→arrival）

3．极想；渴望（be）dying to．

10．There are several beautiful toy cars to choose from，but ____is cheap enough for my purse．（　　）

7．Our English teacher requires us to underline ____ we regard as key points when we read the text．（　　）

16．Section A
Directions：For each blank in the following passage there are four words or phrases marked A，B，C and D．Fill in each blank with the word or phrase that best fits the context．
The Paris agreement to fight climate change became international law Friday．The landmark deal aims to deal with global warming among growing （41）B that the world is becoming hotter even faster than scientists expected．
So far，96 countries，accounting for just over two-thirds of the world's greenhouse gas emissions，have formally joined the agreement，which （42）A to limit global warming this century to 2 degrees Celsius （3.6 degrees Fahrenheit） above what it was before machines and （43）D appeared in the late 1700s．The United States （44）A entered into the agreement in September，and more countries are expected to come aboard in the coming weeks and months．
United Nations Secretary General Ban-Ki Moon celebrated the event，talking with nongovernmental groups at U．N．headquarters in New York to hear their concerns and （45）C for the future．
"This is an emotional moment for me．It is a credit to all of you．And it is （46）B for the world，"Ban said in his opening remarks．
He praised the （47）B for getting hundreds of millions of people to back fighting climate change but （48）C the outcome remained uncertain．
"We are still in a race （49）A time．We need to move on to a low-emission and climate-sustainable future，"Ban added．
Scientists praised the speed at which the agreement，signed by 192 parties last December in Paris，has come into force，saying it shows a new commitment by the international community to （50）C a problem that is melting polar ice caps，sending sea levels （51）Band transforming vast areas into desert．
"（52）D the real effect of the agreement after it goes into effect is still uncertain，it is a simple sign that the international society is much more open to alter economic and political behavior to control climate change，which is （53）D positive，"said Feng Qi，executive director of the School of Environmental and Sustainability Sciences at Kean University in New Jersey．
Scientists and （54）B say the agreement is the first step of a much longer and complicated process of reducing the use of fossil fuels，which currently （55）C the majority of the planet's energy needs and also are the primary drivers of global warming．

41．A．applicants	B．fears	C．observations	D．comments
42．A．seeks	B．allows	C．assumes	D．seizes
43．A．institutions	B．laboratories	C．committees	D．factories
44．A．formally	B．instantly	C．particularly	D．generally
45．A．prejudices	B．approaches	C．visions	D．concepts
46．A．spiritual	B．historic	C．appropriate	D．valueless
47．A．agreements	B．groups	C．headquarters	D．emissions
48．A．apologized	B．denied	C．warned	D．overlooked
49．A．against	B．on	C．for	D．without
50．A．avoid	B．find	C．address	D．ignore
51．A．falling	B．rising	C．disappearing	D．remaining
52．A．Until	B．Since	C．If	D．While
53．A．under no circumstances	B．on the contrary	C．in no case	D．by all means
54．A．officers	B．policymakers	C．employers	D．technicians
55．A．remove	B．preserve	C．supply	D．restore

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