Question

书面表达(满分25分)
今天，你收到了好友小玲的一封信，信中她说最近想买一部手机，为此她征求你的意见，根据以下提示，请你写一封建议她不要买手机的回信。字数：120左右，信的开头已给出，不讲入字数。
提示：
1、发短信会占据太多的学习时间;
2、校内不许用手机，因为会打扰别人;
3、还经常会收到一些欺骗性的不良短信;
4、因手机费用而增加父母的负担。

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ling,
I’m very glad to receive your letter today. How are you getting along with your study?
I am pleased that you want my advice on whether you should buy a mobile phone or not. If you do not mind, I suggest that you should not buy one. Why? First, it takes up too much time to send or receive short messages. Therefore the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter. Second, it is forbidden to use mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class. Otherwise, your behavior can disturb others. Third, you may be disturbed by some false short messages. Furthermore, as a student, you have to ask parents for the phone expense. That is, they will burden more to support you than before.
You must, of course, use your own judgment, but I would suggest this.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Lei.

解析这题是要点作文，写作时，要将要点写全，还不能逐字逐句翻译，切记不能用汉语的表达方式，要用英语常用短语和句型，如范文里的 I am pleased that you want my advice on whether you should buy a mobile phone or not.这句话中出现了两个宾语从句，the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter.这是定语从句，it is forbidden to use mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class.这是it做形式主语的用法，当然，写作时不能忽略文章的连贯问题，可以用First 、Second、Third,连接，还要根据文章的句子间的逻辑关系选用适当的副词，如：Therefore 、Otherwise等。