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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learn to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into my own language everything which I came across while I was reading. My teacher advised myself to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day.

Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself with simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was the good one. Their words were an great encouragement to me.

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In order to know a foreign language thoroughly, four things are necessary. Firstly, we must understand the language when we hear 1. spoken. Secondly, we must be able to speak it correctly with confidence and without hesitation. 2. ,we must be able to read the language , and fourthly, we must be able to write it. We must be able to make sentences that are grammatically correct.

There is no easy way to succeed 3. learning a language. 4. good memory is of great help, but it is not enough only 5. (memorize) rules from a grammar book. It is not much use learning by heart long list of 6. (word) and their meaning, studying the dictionary and so on. We must learn by using the language. If we are 7. (satisfy)with only a few rules we have memorized, we are not really learning the language. “Learn through use” is a good piece of 8. (advise) for those 9. are studying a new language. Practice is important. We must practise speaking and 10. (write) the language whenever we can.

After her husband had gone to work,Mrs.Richards send her children to school and went upstairs to her bedroom.She was too excited to do any housework that morning.

In the evening she would go to a fancy dress party with her husband.She wanted to dress up as a ghost and as she had made her costume the night before,she was impatient to try it on.Though the costume consisted only of a sheet,it was really splendid.After putting it on,She went downstairs to find out whether it would be comfortable to wear.

Just as Mrs.Richards was entering the dining-room,there was a knock on the front door.She knew it must be the baker.She had told him to come straight in if ever she failed to open the door and to leave the bread on the table.Not wanting to frighten the poor man,she quickly hid in the smell store-room under the stair.She heard the front door opened and heavy footsteps in the hall.Suddenly the door of the store-room was opened and in came a man.Mrs.Richards realized it must be the man from the Electricity Board who had come to read the meter.She tried to explain the situation,saying "It's only me." but it was too late,the man let out a cry and jumped back several paces.When Mrs.Richards walked towards him,he fled,losing the door heavily behind him.

1.The reason for Mrs.Richards' excitement that day was that .

A. she was to attend an evening party B. she had sent her children to school

C. she wouldn't do any housework that morning D. she had made a special costume the night before

2.Mrs.Richards went downstairs with the costume on so as to .

A. frighten the person who was knocking on the door B. find out if she had finished the costume

C. made sure that the costume fitted her well D. receive the bread and do some cooking

3.The man who was knocking at the door was .

A. a baker B. an electricity man C. a thief D. her husband

4.What did the man do after he knocked on the front door?

A. He entered just as Mrs.Richards had told him to.

B. He did not do anything as Mrs.Richards had expected him to.

C. He went straight in so as to find Mrs.Richards.

D. He stepped directly towards the meter.

Across Britain, burnt toast will be served to mothers in bed  this morning as older sons and daughters to deliver their supermarket bunches of flowers, But, according to a new study, we should be placing a higher value on motherhood all year.

   Mothers have long known that their home worked was just heavy as paid work. Now, the new study has shown that if they were paid for their parental labors, they would earn as much as￡172,000 a year.

   The study looked at the range of jobs mothers do, as well as the hours they are working, to determine the figure. This would make their yearly income ￡30, 000 more than the Prime Minister earns.

   By analyzing the numbers, it found the average mother works 119 hours a week,40 of which would usually be paid at a standard rate 79 hours as overtime. After questioning 1,000 mothers with children under 18,it found that ,on most days, mums started their routine work at 7am and finished at around 11pm.

   To calculate just how much mothers would earn from that labor, it suggested some of the roles that mums could take on, including housekeeper, part-time lawyer, personal trainer and entertainer. Being a part-time lawyer, at ￡48.98 an hour, would prove to be the most profitable of the “mum jibs”, with psychologist（心理学家）a close second.

It also asked mothers about the challenges they face, with 80 percent making emotional（情感的）emand as the hardest thing about motherhood.

Over a third of mums felt they needed more training and around half said they missed going out with friends.

The study shoes mothers matter all year long and not just on, Mother’s Day. The emotional, physical and mental energy mothers devote to their children can be never-ending, but children are also sources of great joy and happiness. Investing（投入）in time for parenting and raising relationships is money well spent.

1.How much would a mother earn a year if working as the Prime Minister?

A. ￡30,000. B. ￡142,000. C. ￡172,000. D. ￡202,000.

2.The biggest challenge for most mothers is from        .

A. emotional demand B. low pay for work C. heavy workload D. lack of training

3.What is stressed in the last paragraph?

A. Mothers’ importance shows in family all year long.

B. The sacrifices mothers make are huge but worthwhile.

C. Mothers’ devotion to children can hardly be calculated.

D. Investing time in parenting would bring a financial return.

4.What can we conclude from the study?

A. Mothers’ working hours should be largely reduced.

B. Mothers should balance their time for work and rest.

C. Mothers’ labor is of a higher value than it is realized.

D. Mothers should be freed from housework for social life.

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Ecotourism

1. It is a new term in today’s tourism industry. But in an age of growing environmental awareness, it is not too difficult for us to imagine and understand this new form of holiday.

Ecotourism, which is considered as a kind of responsible tourism, is typically defined as travel to places where special and unusual plants, animals and cultural heritages are the main attractions. 2. Therefore, programs concerning the protection of some natural and cultural spots also form a part of ecotourism.

Ecotourism is developing at great speed. According to a recent report by the World Tourism Organization, ecotourism in recent years has enjoyed an annual growth of about 5% worldwide. 3. They include bird watching, hiking, diving, photography and taking part in various kinds of local cultural events.

If you love communing with nature, conserving the environment or improving the lives of people then ecotourism is an excellent way to see new and exciting places. 4. However, it looks like some smaller towns and country areas may well become the new destinations for people to visit tomorrow because they are rich in ecological, cultural and historical resources.

Ecotourism has been gaining increasing recognition and popularity mainly for the relaxing, natural and vivid experience it offers to tourists. People are attracted to nature and long to be close to it. However, a conflict between nature and human beings is unavoidable. 5.

A. The definition of ecotourism is beyond words.

B. It takes ecology and culture into consideration.

C. You may not be very familiar with ‘‘ecotourism’’.

D. More than 80 activities have been listed for ecotourism.

E. People can have great fun enjoying nature through ecotourism.

F. Big cities are still the major places that attract tourists in our society today.

G. How to protect natural resources while taking advantage of them is of great importance.

S______________ is the pleasure that you feel when you do something or get something that you wanted or needed to do or get.

I live in a big city with a lot of homeless people．Luckily there’re ____21____ ways of helping them and you needn't have a lot of ____22____. One way to help is to buy their monthly magazine. ____23____ doing this one day, I got to ____24____ a young homeless man. He was often ____25____ the magazine at the train station.

He was a poor farmer from another country. After a while, I discovered that his ____26____ was close to mine. It ____27____ that we were born in the same month.

I met him last year ____28____ after his birthday, and after congratulating him, without ____29____, I asked if he had had a good day. He ____30____ and said that he hadn’t really celebrated. I felt so ____31____.

I just couldn't bear the thought of this nice, young man being ____32____ on his 25th birthday with no friends, no presents, no cake, nothing! So I went home and looked in my yarn(纱线) basket. Luckily for me, I had enough yarn ____33____. I set to work and knitted(编织) a ____34____ for the young man. The yarn had become a little dirty ____35____ I didn't knit very often. Then I washed the yarn so the scarf(围巾) would be ____36____ when he got it.

I met him on my own birthday as I was going shopping. I had ____37____ to meet him so I had ____38____ the scarf and a piece of my own birthday cake around with me. He was very ____39____ with these gifts and so was I. The tears in his eyes was the best ____40____ he could have given me.

1.A. correct B. basic C. small D. cheap

2.A. work B. energy C. money D. experience

3.A. In B. On C. With D. By

4.A. like B. realize C. meet D. know

5.A. selling B. delivering C. releasing D. collecting

6.A. birthday B. house C. height D. age

7.A. said B. discovered C. thought D. meant

8.A. suddenly B. shortly C. eventually D. instantly

9.A. preparing B. permitting C. thinking D. greeting

10.A. looked up B. turned up C. looked down D. calmed down

11.A. foolish B. helpless C. nervous D. confused

12.A. unforgettable B. unbelievable C. alone D. hungry

13.A. used B. prepared C. left D. produced

14.A. scarf B. sweater C. cap D. glove

15.A. though B. since C. unless D. and

16.A. different B. clean C. beautiful D. new

17.A. liked B. hoped C. promised D. agreed

18.A. made B. brought C. received D. carried

19.A. happy B. surprised C. satisfied D. frightened

20.A. reward B. opportunity C. surprise D. present

When The New Republic magazine predicted who would win the 2016 Nobel Prize in literature on Oct 6, it said：“Not Bob Dylan. That’s for sure.”

But the award came as a surprise to many. On Oct 13, the famous US musician was named the Nobel laureate by the Swedish Academy. He has “created new poetic expressions within the great American song tradition", according to the organization.

Although Dylan, 75, is not really thought to be a literary writer, he has given the world a lot of creative work over 50 years, especially when it comes to his folk songs.

In his 1985 album Biograph, Dylan wrote about the appeal of folk music to him. Rock songs “weren’t serious enough or didn’t reflect life in a realistic way", according to Dylan. But folk, was “a more serious type of thing. The songs are filled with more sadness; more joy …much deeper feelings".

Dylan’s music and lyrics spoke to many people during the 1960s. His lyrics were often about great political issues, such as the civil rights movement. The 1960s were a time of change when the young were making sure that their voices were heard. The idea is most famously expressed in Dylan's The Times They Are a -Changin (1964), which warns the world, “You better start swimming or you'll sink like a stone. For the times they are a-changin！”

There were complaints that a literary prize had been given to a singer. But ancient “Greek poets Homer and Sappho wrote poetic works that were meant to be listened to, that were meant to be performed, often with instruments — and it’s the same way with Dylan", the Swedish Academy’s permanent secretary Sara Danius told CNN.

It could even be said that giving the important prize to Dylan has brought back an old literary tradition. The millions whose lives Dylan’s words and music have changed will surely welcome the award.

1.Dylan found folk music attractive because ________.

A. it brought joy to people

B. it could be used to express feelings freely

C. it reflected life on a much deeper level

D. it needed more creativity than other types of music

2.Which of the following statements is TRUE about Dylan according to the article?

A. He never thought that he would win the Nobel Prize.

B. Most of his influential works were created in the 1960s.

C. His songs expressed people’s feelings well during the 1960s.

D. His fans were mostly young people who were active in political movements.

3.According to the last two paragraphs, ________.

A. lyrics can be seen as a literary form

B. a literary prize should not be given to a singer

C. Dylan’s works were inspired by Greek poets

D. Dylan deserves the award because he influenced many songwriters

4.What’s the author’s attitude toward giving Bob Dylan the 2016 Nobel Prize in literature?

A. supportive B. objective C. sceptical D. ambiguous

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Ways to Help Your Teen Adjust to a New School

In an ideal world, a teen could start and finish their schooling at the same school.1.. And while a move to a new city can be stressful for the entire family, it may be especially difficult for your teenager. Use these strategies to help your teen adjust to a new school.

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The adjustment period begins before your teen ever steps foot into the new school. Point out the new opportunities that’ll be available. If you have confidence that you can make it a new city or a new job, your teen will feel more confident about his ability to succeed in a new school.

Listen to your teen’s concerns

If you don’t have an open relationship with your teen currently, now it is the time to build one. It’s easiest to get him to open up when he’s feeling unsure. 3..Is he worried about new teachers? Does he doubt his ability to make the basketball team?

Talk about your reasons for moving

4.. If you’re preparing for a better career opportunity, or you need to find a new house because you can’t afford to stay where you are, talk about it.

Learn about the new school ahead of time

Conduct as much research as possible about the new school before your teen starts attending. Get your teen to find out about the size of the school and the types of classes offered.5..Talking to a network guidance counselor ahead of time can also be helpful.

A. Keep a positive attitude

B. Develop your teen’s different abilities

C. Keep asking questions about his biggest concerns

D. Be honest with your teen about why you’re moving

E. Most schools have websites that offer a wealth of information

F. Joining a club or playing a sport can be a great way for your teen

G. However, when a family must move, a teenager must switch schools

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