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11.注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Wang ping was born in a ordinary peasant's family.In the past,his parents had to leave their hometown earn money to provide schooling for him.So he has to live with his grandparents.Though his grandparents loved him deeply,and they were too old to take well care of him.What was more,every time he saw other parents played with their children,he couldn't help crying.How a happy life they were living,he thought.Luckily,his parents can keep him company every day in this year,which makes him feel very happy.She will never forget the day he spent with his grandparents,though.

分析 本文讲述了一个留守儿童的故事.
王平的父母外出打工挣钱,所以他不得不和祖父母在一起,虽然他们很爱他,但是他们年纪太大了,不能很好的照顾他.他很羡慕那些和父母在一起玩耍的孩子.幸运地是,今年他和父母在一起了.

解答 Wang ping was born in a ordinary peasant's family.In the past,his parents had to leave their hometown∧earn money to provide schooling for him.So hehas to live with his grandparents.Though his grandparents loved him deeply,and they were too old to take well care of him.What was more,every time he saw other parents played with their children,he couldn't help crying.How a happy life they were living,he thought.Luckily,his parents can keep him company every day in this year,which makes him feel very happy.She will never forget the day he spent with his grandparents,though.
解析:
1.a-an.考查冠词.修饰元音开头的ordinary用an.
2.earn前加to.考查动词不定式.earn  money 是his parents had to leave their hometown 的目的状语,所以用动词不定式,即to do.
3.has-had.考查谓语动词的时态.根据上文可知本句用一般过去时态,所以用had.
4.去掉and.考查连词.Though his grandparents loved him deeply表示"尽管祖父母爱着他",是让步状语从句,所以they were too old to take well care of him是主句,因此去掉and.
5.well-good.考查形容词和副词的区别.修饰名词 care 用形容词good.take good care of 表示"好好照顾".
6.played-playing.考查非谓语动词.see sb doing sth表示"看到某人正在做某事",本句表示"每次看到父母和孩子玩耍",所以用playing.
7.How-What.考查感叹句.修饰名词a happy life 用What,表示"多么快乐的生活".
8.去掉in.考查介词.指示代词this year前不用介词修饰,所以去掉in.
9.She-He.考查代词.代指上文的男孩用He.
10.day-days.考查名词复数.本句表示"他忘不了和祖父母在一起的日子",不是一天,所以用days.

点评 考查短文改错.
感叹句的用法:
1.由what引导的感叹句
  what修饰名词或名词短语,有以下两种形式:
  1.What+a(an)+(形容词)+单数可数名词+主语+谓语!如:What an apple this is!
  2.What+(形容词)+可数名词复数或不可数名词+主语+谓语!What kind women they are!
2.由How引导的感叹句
  how用来修饰形容词、副词或动词.其结构是:How+形容词(副词)+主语+谓语!How hard the worker are working!
  注意:当how修饰动词时,动词不跟着感叹词提到主语之前.
  How the runner runs!
  在口语中,感叹句的主语和谓语常常省略.如:
  What a nice present!(省略it is)
  How disappointed!(省略she is或其它可作本句主、谓的词语)

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