题目内容
15．假设你是高三学生李华，你的母校校刊编辑邀请你给初三的同学写一封公开信，内容包括：1．你在高三的学习和生活情况；
2．你对英语学习意义的认识；
3．你对初三同学英语学习的建议．
注意：1．内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译；
2．字数100左右，文章开头已提供，不计入总词数．
Dear fellow students：
I'd like to share with you some of my thoughts．
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的母校校刊编辑邀请你给初三的同学写一封公开信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你在高三的学习和生活情况；你对英语学习意义的认识；你对初三同学英语学习的建议． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make progress取得进步；Meanwhile同时；in order to以便，为了；lead to 导致；play a vital role in 在…方面起关键作用；make use of 充分利用；as for至于，关于；form a habit of形成一个…的习惯；take advantage of 利用；Besides另外；focus on专注于；
Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I made great progress after a full devotion to my study．（高分句型一） Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）
As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三）
解答 Dear fellows，
I am really glad to share my thoughts with you．Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I made great progress after a full devotion to my study．（高分句型一） Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）
A good command of English plays a vital role in the coming exam as well as the future study．Making more use of the knowledge makes you a better informed person．As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三） Besides，focus on mistakes，and consult your teachers in time．
Best wishes for all of you．
Yours，
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
