Question

假如你热衷集邮，但家长并不支持，于是你向一个学生心声的专栏写信咨询解决的办法。内容包括：

1.你的意见：(1)增长知识；(2)减压；(3)挣钱。

2.家长意见：(1)浪费钱；(2)占了学习时间。

注意：1. 开头和结尾已给出

    2. 可适当添加细节使上下文连贯。

      3. 词数100词左右。

Dear Sir，

I’m a Grade-Two student in a senior high school.________________________________

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I don’t want to argue with them any more. Could you help me out? Looking forward to your early reply!

                                               A Worried Reader

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Sir，

    I’m a Grade-Two student in a senior high school.  I’ve always been fond of collecting stamps since I was a child. As far as I’m concerned，collecting stamps is a meaningful hobby, helping me to know a lot. Besides， dealing with my collection of stamps not only gives me great satisfaction but also helps me relax under the great pressure of studies. What’s more，I even earn money by selling some stamps and my collection will be more valuable as times goes by.

However， my parents are strongly against it for they consider it as a waste of money and they also think that sorting out my stamps may take up too much of my time， which should be spent on my studies.

    I don’t want to argue with them any more. Could you help me out? Looking forward to your early reply!

                                               A Worried Reader

【解析】这是一篇就家长反对自己集邮写求助信，信中一定要写清楚你自己对集邮的看法，既有对你的好处；同时，写清楚家长反对你集邮的原因。在写作时，尽量要用复合句来表达，内容可以适当增加。另外，注意分段。自己的观点和父母的看法应分属两段。