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写作(共两节,满分35分)

第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’m an senior high school student. I’m upset these days because my parents. They pay too much attention on my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades, they will be happy and satisfied. But if not, they will be worrying about me, especially my mom. I never want to let them down, but she has made a plan for my future. I was very bored with it and don’t know how to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledges is important for everybody. Therefore, I can’t stand they are always making me to study. I really expect they can understand me.

1.an→a

2.because后加 of

3.on--to

4.worrying—worried

5.them—her

6.was—am

7.how--what

8.knowledges—knowledge

9.Therefore –However

10.to study去掉 to

【解析】

1.an→a不定冠词误用。senior是以辅音开头的单词,所以前面用a。

2.连词误用。because of后面加名词;because后面要跟句子。

3.介词误用。pay attention to注意。

4.形容词误用。be worried about担心。

5.代词误用。此处是指不能让我的妈妈失望。所以应用her代替。

6. 时态误用。根据后半句的时态,可知此处是一般现在时。

7.特殊疑问词误用。what做do 的宾语。

8.单复数误用。knowledge是不可数名词,不能变复数。

9.副词误用。根据句意可知此处表示转折。however然而。

10.非谓语误用。make sb do sth.,是固定短语,中间不加介词。

考点:短文改错

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