Question

第II卷（共40分）

第三部分  写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节.短文改错（共1题，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给的短文中的10处错误。要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该词下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处, 多该不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English．One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words．

Answer 1

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in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her

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advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple

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English．One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the

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class．Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words．

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