Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My hometown is a small village. Small as it is, but it’s very beautiful.

　 There are a number of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we fly kites are made by themselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer, the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Beside, the wild apples are nice to eating. In autumn, corns at the foot of the hills were ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and make snowmen.

    In my hometown there are blue sky, fresh air, sweet water and kind people. I love my hometown!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 去掉but

 hill → hills

 kites后加that / which或去掉are

 themselves → ourselves

 highly → high

 Beside → Besides

 eating → eat

 were → are

 something → everything

 are → is

【解析】

试题分析：

 去掉but上下文自己没有转折关系，是顺接的关系，而且上文的small as it is=Though it is small

 hill → hills   A number of许多，后面要接复数形式。

 kites后加that / which或去掉are用定语从句修饰先行词。

 themselves → ourselves 上文出现的是we，故使用ourselves

 highly → high    high可以表示抽象意义的高。

 Beside → Besides   Besides 副词:而且

 eating → eat  用不定式做补足语

 were → are  本文使用一般现在时。

 something → everything  所有的物体都覆盖着雪。

 are → is  本句是倒装句，主语是后面的blue sky，这是不可数名词，故使用单数形式。

考点：考查短文纠错

点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力以及细节考查，特别关注单复数和时态。