题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是光明中学的学生李华,得知国外某大学历史悠久,课程灵活,有意申请到该校英语系学习。请根据表格信息,用英语写一封自荐信。
个人信息 | 男,17岁,高三年级学生 |
性格与潜质 | 开朗,喜欢与人交往;有良好的团队精神;适应能力强 |
学习与获奖情况 | 学习刻苦,成绩名列前茅 曾获学校英语演讲比赛一等奖 |
注意: 1.词数100左右。 2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。
提示词:英语演讲比赛—English Speech Contest
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua from Guang Ming High School in Beijing, China.
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua from Guang Ming High School in Beijing, China. I would like to apply for admission to the English Department of your university.
I am a seventeenyearold boy, and now in senior Grade 3. I am sociable, easygoing, and good at communicating with others. I have made many friends and I can work well in a team. Meanwhile, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment.
As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and have managed to get fairly high grades. I am especially good at English, and have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest. Therefore, I believe English is a good major for me.
I should be grateful if you can take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达根据提示写一封信。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照表格中的顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,开头段简明说出自己写信的目的。介绍自己的优点时层次分明,通过两种角色的分析可以表现出作者的独特品质。句式新颖如:As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and have managed to get fairly high grades.运用了现在完成进行时,并在最后一段表示对对方的感谢,完美收尾。