Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，你的好友王林生病了。现在请你给他写一封信，要点包括：

1．听到好友生病时的心情；

2．劝他放弃熬夜的习惯；

3．建议他身体康复后要保证睡眠，经常锻炼，合理饮食。

注意：1．词数120左右：

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Lin,

I am terribly sorry to hear that you have been ill for a few days and

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

I am terribly sorry to hear that you have been ill for a few days and I hope that you will get well soon. You often stay up late at night, which is really a bad habit. Staying up has done great harm to your health and I hope that you can give up the bad habit.

To keep healthy, you should have enough sleep and take regular exercise. Taking proper exercise can make you active and keep you fit. In addition, you should eat a balanced diet, which is helpful to your health.

Hope to see you well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为应用文作文，要求给生病的好友王林写封信。内容要求1．听到好友生病时的心情；

2．劝他放弃熬夜的习惯；3．建议他身体康复后要保证睡眠，经常锻炼，合理饮食。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that you have been ill for a few days。that you will get well soon. 和that you can give up the bad habit.定语从句which is really a bad habit.和which is helpful to your health.动词-ing形式Staying up和Taking proper exercise做主语。do great harm to，a balanced diet等词语。