题目内容
【题目】某英语报社向大众征稿,谈谈个人的爱好,假如你是李华,请你依据下图提示,介绍自己的爱好:
注意:1词数:100左右(开头巳写好,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
I'm glad to share my hobby with you.____________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor,
I’m glad to share my hobby with you. My hobby is reading books. I was fascinated by so many colorful pictures and interesting stories in the books when I was a little girl. Since then, I can’t help loving reading books.
I like reading books because I can get a lot of knowledge. I love reading books because it can bring me into a fantastic world to explore the unknown world. What’s more, reading books can teach me to become a kind, valuable person. Additionally, it can also help me to deal with problems in daily life.
I am so enthusiastic about reading books that I have planned to become a writer as my career. Books are my forever friends!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇以图表形式的作文,注意表格的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,尤其是词汇的不同表达法。
【亮点说明】What’s more, reading books can teach me to become a kind, valuable person.这句话运用动名词短语作主语。I am so enthusiastic about reading books that I have planned to become a writer as my career.这句话用了结果状语从句。除此之外,此文还运用一些短语share sth. with sb.,since then,what’s more,deal with,be enthusiastic about,plan to do等等。