Question

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When Molly's father was about to work，his daughter Molly，aged 8，hand him a bag．
The father was in hurry so he didn't know what was inside．While having lunch，he took out
the contents：a plastic dinosaur，a tiny sea shell and three small stone．The busy father
smiled，finished eating，and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly's junk．
This evening，Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it：I love you，
Daddy．The father went to his office hurried，carrying the junk home．He asked Molly to tell
her about the junk．It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story．To Molly they
were not junk and treasures!

Answer 1

分析 Molly在爸爸上班之前交给爸爸一个包，里面装着一些玩具和小石头，在爸爸看来这是一堆垃圾，可是对 Molly来说是她要送给爸爸的礼物，是一笔财富．

解答 When Molly's father was about to work，his daughter Molly，aged 8，hand him a bag．The father was in∧hurry so he didn't know what was inside．While having lunch，he took out the contents：a plastic dinosaur，a tiny sea shell and three small stone．The busy father smiled，finished eating，and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly's junk．This evening，Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it：I love you，Daddy．The father went to his office hurried，carrying the junk home．He asked Molly to tell her about the junk．It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story．To Molly they
were not junk and treasures!
详解：
1．hand改为handed；考查动词的时态，本文的基本时态是一般过去时，故此处也要用一般过去时handed．
2．in后加a；考查冠词，in a hurry是固定搭配，意为"匆忙地"．
3．stone改为stones；考查名词单复数，stone是可数名词，前面有数词three，故用复数形式stones．
4．sweeping改为swept；考查并列成分，此处swept与前面的smiled和finished并列作句子的谓语，故用一般过去时swept．
5．include改为including；考查介词，including此处是介词，和其后的名词/代词一起形成介宾短语，意思是"包括…在内"
6．This改为That；考查代词，此处是间接引语，意为"那天晚上…"，故用代词that．
7．hurried改为hurriedly；考查副词．此处用副词做状语修饰动词went，故用hurriedly．
8．her改为him；考查代词．此处是指她的父亲故用him．
9．was去掉；考查语态．此处是主动语态，故去掉was．
10．and 改为but；考查连词．前后词之间是转折关系，故用but．

点评 阅读短文，了解大意，确定基本时态；运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系，找出文中错误加以修改．