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非选择题部分 (共40分)
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the student volunteer for the Expo 2010 Shanghai, I feel very proudly since the World Expo will promote the exchange of different cultures and show the latest achievements of civilizations around the globe. And I have to say lots of bad behaviors still exist around us. For example, some people didn’t obey the traffic rule when crossing the road, and some even spit in public, which makes me feel disappointing. These bad behaviors will spoil the image of our country so it is high time that we solved this problems.
In my opinion, we should behave politely and spare no efforts build a harmonious society. Besides, some strict measures must be taken to stop people from behave badly. Only in this way can we will make Expo 2010 Shanghai China a great success.

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As the student volunteer for the Expo 2010 Shanghai, I feel very proudly since the World
a                                                proud
Expo will promote the exchange of different cultures and show the latest achievements of
civilizations around the globe. And I have to say lots of bad behaviors still exist around us. For
But
example, some people didn’t obey the traffic rule when crossing the road, and some even spit in
don’t            rules
public, which makes me feel disappointing. These bad behaviors will spoil the image of our
disappointed
country so it is high time that we solved this problems.
these/problem
In my opinion, we should behave politely and spare no efforts ∧build a harmonious
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society. Besides, some strict measures must be taken to stop people from behave badly. Only in this way
behaving
can we will make Expo 2010 Shanghai China a great success.

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